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Roamer Things - Team Fortress 2 Fragmovie
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#1
0 Frags +

Hey !

New fragmovie is out, check this out !
All frags by Corbac, Hope you enjoy. :D

https://youtu.be/urvx1UEHCv8

Hey !

New fragmovie is out, check this out !
All frags by Corbac, Hope you enjoy. :D

https://youtu.be/urvx1UEHCv8
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#2
5 Frags +

absolutely beautiful to watch, but kind of hard to tell what's actually going on in some of the clips :/

absolutely beautiful to watch, but kind of hard to tell what's actually going on in some of the clips :/
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#3
13 Frags +

The custom killfeed is a bit unneeded but the frags and editing are really good

The custom killfeed is a bit unneeded but the frags and editing are really good
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#4
17 Frags +

holy fuck only just realised it was a stranger things reference when sunshine changed to the upside down

holy fuck only just realised it was a stranger things reference when sunshine changed to the upside down
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#5
3 Frags +
VulcanThe custom killfeed is a bit unneeded

what u on about? dont listen to this guy it is a very well edited frag in my opinion

[quote=Vulcan]The custom killfeed is a bit unneeded[/quote]
what u on about? dont listen to this guy it is a very well edited frag in my opinion
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#6
10 Frags +

50 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?

50 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?
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#7
11 Frags +
31VulcanThe custom killfeed is a bit unneededwhat u on about? dont listen to this guy it is a very well edited frag in my opinion

I liked the frag video I just felt that the custom killfeed was a bit out of place

[quote=31][quote=Vulcan]The custom killfeed is a bit unneeded[/quote]
what u on about? dont listen to this guy it is a very well edited frag in my opinion[/quote]
I liked the frag video I just felt that the custom killfeed was a bit out of place
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#8
12 Frags +
Hunter_2_050 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?

I really like this frag video but I also thought this was excessive.

[quote=Hunter_2_0]50 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?[/quote]

I really like this frag video but I also thought this was excessive.
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#9
7 Frags +
Hunter_2_050 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?

Yeah because, the intro of stranger things is pretty long.

VulcanThe custom killfeed is a bit unneeded but the frags and editing are really good

It was a part because Corbac want to show the name and the normal HUD was broke with the new MAJ.

[quote=Hunter_2_0]50 second intro on a 3 minute frag movie?[/quote]

Yeah because, the intro of stranger things is pretty long.

[quote=Vulcan]The custom killfeed is a bit unneeded but the frags and editing are really good[/quote]

It was a part because Corbac want to show the name and the normal HUD was broke with the new MAJ.
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#10
-4 Frags +

"this video is 50% frags 50% b-roll because the thing were referencing thats an hour long also has a long intro"

i rly didnt like how u chose to ramp slow-mo clips because it resulted in either

(a) an overly slow-mo'd rocket explosion and death (which everybody has seen 9 bazillion times)
(b) fast-forwarding through the interesting part of the kill (the aiming)

for how polished everything was the killnotices looked rly basic/out of place

nice frags though

"this video is 50% frags 50% b-roll because the thing were referencing thats an hour long also has a long intro"

i rly didnt like how u chose to ramp slow-mo clips because it resulted in either

(a) an overly slow-mo'd rocket explosion and death (which everybody has seen 9 bazillion times)
(b) fast-forwarding through the interesting part of the kill (the aiming)

for how polished everything was the killnotices looked rly basic/out of place

nice frags though
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#11
3 Frags +

Thanks for feedback but i think what you are talking about it's very subjective.

Thanks for feedback but i think what you are talking about it's very subjective.
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#12
4 Frags +

Otherwise job very well done, but the intro was a little too long for a 3min video. I liked the flow a lot.

Otherwise job very well done, but the intro was a little too long for a 3min video. I liked the flow a lot.
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#13
3 Frags +

might be a bit subjective but i found it weird how the song changed randomly in the middle of the video so it felt like 2 different frag movies glued together and also i think the end was too abrupt maybe lower the volume of the song slowly before it or something. EDIT: or you couldve cut it like half a sec earlier
also i dont get what the weird barbed-wire(?) textures at the beginning were (maybe its a strangers thing reference i wouldnt know)
frags were insane

might be a bit subjective but i found it weird how the song changed randomly in the middle of the video so it felt like 2 different frag movies glued together and also i think the end was too abrupt maybe lower the volume of the song slowly before it or something. EDIT: or you couldve cut it like half a sec earlier
also i dont get what the weird barbed-wire(?) textures at the beginning were (maybe its a strangers thing reference i wouldnt know)
frags were insane
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#14
4 Frags +

epic skin epic frag epic video

epic skin epic frag epic video
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#15
1 Frags +

Nit-Picky Notes:

  • Should have just cut out the very first part of the intro, start with a 1-2 sec transition to stranger things parody
  • Killfeed is both too large and the edges of the icons have white pixels around them
  • Cutting between 2 genres like that with the music doesn't feel smooth, kind of ruined the transition you had going there
  • At 2:19 there's a weird fish eye effect near the end but only on the bottom of the screen, probably should have been smoothed out a bit more
  • During some of the slows it looked like you were losing some frames, maybe that's just me but it was definitely noticable
  • Have to commit to either really fast of somewhat slow speed transitions the middle-ground you're at right now creates a really jumpy effect
  • I saw you had some STV footage in there pre-frag clip, but throwing in some 3rd person rewinding clips or just 3rd person frags in general may have add some variety the editing style is otherwise lacking

This is everything I noticed that isn't entirely my own opinion/preferences. Besides the intro I didn't really see much of a unique style thrown in, so I'm not sure if that's what you were going for if you just haven't figured out the style yet. Either way, having that style helps define you as an editor as you progress and gives something for people to point out as "your thing". Overall, great work!

Nit-Picky Notes:
[list]
[*] Should have just cut out the very first part of the intro, start with a 1-2 sec transition to stranger things parody
[*] Killfeed is both too large and the edges of the icons have white pixels around them
[*] Cutting between 2 genres like that with the music doesn't feel smooth, kind of ruined the transition you had going there
[*] At 2:19 there's a weird fish eye effect near the end but only on the bottom of the screen, probably should have been smoothed out a bit more
[*] During some of the slows it looked like you were losing some frames, maybe that's just me but it was definitely noticable
[*] Have to commit to either really fast of somewhat slow speed transitions the middle-ground you're at right now creates a really jumpy effect
[*] I saw you had some STV footage in there pre-frag clip, but throwing in some 3rd person rewinding clips or just 3rd person frags in general may have add some variety the editing style is otherwise lacking
[/list]
This is everything I noticed that isn't entirely my own opinion/preferences. Besides the intro I didn't really see much of a unique style thrown in, so I'm not sure if that's what you were going for if you just haven't figured out the style yet. Either way, having that style helps define you as an editor as you progress and gives something for people to point out as "your thing". Overall, great work!
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