Are you fucking serious TF.TV? Whenever someone posts an edit this happens again and AGAIN. This guy clearly put effort into his edit with the intention of making it as good as possible. So your shitposts such as "my eyes", "instantly got a headache" etc. really dont help the editor, the tf2 editing community or the tf2 community as a whole. If you dont like edited clips, it doesnt mean nobody likes them, and unless you have constructive feedback to offer, i suggest you keep your shitposts to yourself.
ulmyxxWhy do you even post here? You know nobody will like it? Like why even post? Are you a troll? i dont understand
Why not? Its a TF2 Videos section. The section description says "editing" as well. Also its interesting you say nobody will like it, because you are using a "i dont like it therefore nobody will like it" logic.
MochaaaaYou need to watch beater
No, Beater makes fragshows which fulfill an entirely different purpose than edits. He has nothing to learn from Beater. If he should watch anything, its other well-made edits, which I assume hes already doing.
This mini-rant doesnt apply to people who actually gave constructive criticism in this thread without shitposting.
As for my opinion on the clip, I actually really like the colours, no they are not "too bright" ffs, however, the glow is too strong in SOME shots. I suggest you tweak your colour settings for each shot separately. What is bright in one clip, might not be in another and such. For example @ 0:22 that process smooth really was too bright, mainly because its main focus is the sky which is generally pretty bright. So to fix the "brightness" you should have only gone to each shot that is bright and fix it there, not change every shot. Tbh the colours in the dreams version are much more interesting than the ones in dark dreams version. Also I noticed youre using probably Edge Softness in MBL, or some other similar thing. You should only apply it to the very edges and make it much more subtle or its gonna make the whole clip blurry and hard to watch. Also, I wouldnt really apply it to POV footage at all as it blurs the killfeed. It works well for smooths though. And about that small segment from 0:34 to 0:38, I dont know, I think you couldve come up with something better there. In the future I also suggest you play around with velocity a bit more, the one you had in this clip was a little too basic, though it worked pretty well nonetheless. Overall, I can see talent for editing, all you need is to edit more to get that polished look. Good luck!