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Anyone wanna critique my mix?
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In the honor of Saint Patty's day, I made a mix before doing all my St. Patty's day things.

I used a lot of mashing and joint tracks, I just want an opinion from fans of electronic music.

https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix
https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix
https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix

In the honor of Saint Patty's day, I made a mix before doing all my St. Patty's day things.

I used a lot of mashing and joint tracks, I just want an opinion from fans of electronic music.

https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix
https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix
https://soundcloud.com/simplyserenade/mess-around-mix
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i will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.

i will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.
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http://paddynotpatty.com/

I'm not a fan of electronic music at all but good work for the time you put in. I like the transitions

http://paddynotpatty.com/

I'm not a fan of electronic music at all but good work for the time you put in. I like the transitions
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vilei will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.

Melbourne?!
I've always tried to Melbourne, but the Hardstyle in me doesn't let me do it.

[quote=vile]i will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.[/quote]
Melbourne?!
I've always tried to Melbourne, but the Hardstyle in me doesn't let me do it.
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Techniikvilei will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.Melbourne?!
I've always tried to Melbourne, but the Hardstyle in me doesn't let me do it.

i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.

[quote=Techniik][quote=vile]i will practice my melbourne shuffle to this. i'll get back to you eventually.[/quote]
Melbourne?!
I've always tried to Melbourne, but the Hardstyle in me doesn't let me do it.[/quote]

i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.
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vile i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.

Shuffling is to express not to impress.
Do it where ever you want to haha.

[quote=vile] i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.[/quote]
Shuffling is to express not to impress.
Do it where ever you want to haha.
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I liked everything after the beat it segment A+ homie

I liked everything after the beat it segment A+ homie
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Techniikvile i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.Shuffling is to express not to impress.
Do it where ever you want to haha.

it's just funner when you can dance to it :P

[quote=Techniik][quote=vile] i want to bust out a sick melbourne shuffle at a house/trance rave.[/quote]
Shuffling is to express not to impress.
Do it where ever you want to haha.[/quote]

it's just funner when you can dance to it :P
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KapowwI liked everything after the beat it segment A+ homie

I had to throw Ducksauce in there somewhere haha
Thanks man I appreciate it!

[quote=Kapoww]I liked everything after the beat it segment A+ homie[/quote]
I had to throw Ducksauce in there somewhere haha
Thanks man I appreciate it!
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I have absolutely zero professional or peer advice to give.

But I have had it on repeat for I don't even know how long and it's still going and I am able to draw to it and I DUNNO, KEEP DOING THESE THINGS.

There's a couple points where it sounds like there's a beat from one of the songs you mixed, and it clashes with the beat of the mix, but it could be intentional and I could have no idea what I am talking about. And this is probably useless anyway because I can't be assed to locate which points.

But yeah. Thanks for sharing. Good stuff.

I have absolutely zero professional or peer advice to give.

But I have had it on repeat for I don't even know how long and it's still going and I am able to draw to it and I DUNNO, KEEP DOING THESE THINGS.

There's a couple points where it sounds like there's a beat from one of the songs you mixed, and it clashes with the beat of the mix, but it could be intentional and I could have no idea what I am talking about. And this is probably useless anyway because I can't be assed to locate which points.

But yeah. Thanks for sharing. Good stuff.
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Sorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.

Sorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.
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TrathSorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.

Probably the most useless comment.
Elaborate a little. Explain the things you didn't like and why. "It's just bad sorry bro" is about as constructive as slamming your dick in a door.

[quote=Trath]Sorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.[/quote]
Probably the most useless comment.
Elaborate a little. Explain the things you didn't like and why. "It's just bad sorry bro" is about as constructive as slamming your dick in a door.
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about as constructive as posting a useless comment then slamming someone for doing the same thing 2 posts later

about as constructive as posting a useless comment then slamming someone for doing the same thing 2 posts later
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RenhetTrathSorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.
Probably the most useless comment.
Elaborate a little. Explain the things you didn't like and why. "It's just bad sorry bro" is about as constructive as slamming your dick in a door.

Just because I can't explain it and it is "negative", lash out on me?
You didn't explain anything either, just your comment was "positive".

But I will try to explain:
It is a ton of Kap Slap mashup's and other various artists, mixed into one song.
The sound quality is significantly lower for some reason, and the "mixing" seems like random stuff/effects. Nothing really fits.
The transitions are ok I guess.

[quote=Renhet][quote=Trath]Sorry, its just a bad mix of a ton of kap slap's and other stuff from all around.
Didn't like.[/quote]
Probably the most useless comment.
Elaborate a little. Explain the things you didn't like and why. "It's just bad sorry bro" is about as constructive as slamming your dick in a door.[/quote]

Just because I can't explain it and it is "negative", lash out on me?
You didn't explain anything either, just your comment was "positive".

But I will try to explain:
It is a ton of Kap Slap mashup's and other various artists, mixed into one song.
The sound quality is significantly lower for some reason, and the "mixing" seems like random stuff/effects. Nothing really fits.
The transitions are ok I guess.
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Why does someone always have to get upset?

On topic though, I like it! I haven't listened to too many mixes but I think it's great.

BARBARA STREISAND

Edit: Download link? Or am I missing it? I'd love to add it to my stream playlist :3

Why does someone always have to get upset?

On topic though, I like it! I haven't listened to too many mixes but I think it's great.

BARBARA STREISAND

Edit: Download link? Or am I missing it? I'd love to add it to my stream playlist :3
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RenhetThere's a couple points where it sounds like there's a beat from one of the songs you mixed, and it clashes with the beat of the mix, but it could be intentional and I could have no idea what I am talking about. And this is probably useless anyway because I can't be assed to locate which points.

I believe I know what you're talking about and I can help elaborate for the OP. I hear the same thing and a good example is at 8:00-8:30 in the first link, when you're mixing "hello" by martin solveg, and what I believe is that "pumped up kicks" track.

Either you're off beat by 1/4rth but still on time, or you've dropped the wrong end "high vs low" on one of the tracks and it's making them sound too different. Maybe their key is way off from each other causing it.

That is what I believe you should work on cause from the little I did listen too I liked most of it but that stood out enough to make me cringe a bit, and I love both of those tracks on their own. I like dance/house a lot so keep it up!!

[quote=Renhet]
There's a couple points where it sounds like there's a beat from one of the songs you mixed, and it clashes with the beat of the mix, but it could be intentional and I could have no idea what I am talking about. And this is probably useless anyway because I can't be assed to locate which points.[/quote]

I believe I know what you're talking about and I can help elaborate for the OP. I hear the same thing and a good example is at 8:00-8:30 in the first link, when you're mixing "hello" by martin solveg, and what I believe is that "pumped up kicks" track.

Either you're off beat by 1/4rth but still on time, or you've dropped the wrong end "high vs low" on one of the tracks and it's making them sound too different. Maybe their key is way off from each other causing it.

That is what I believe you should work on cause from the little I did listen too I liked most of it but that stood out enough to make me cringe a bit, and I love both of those tracks on their own. I like dance/house a lot so keep it up!!
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Thanks to all of you for the advice!

Thanks to all of you for the advice!
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panzerxiiiWhy does someone always have to get upset?

On topic though, I like it! I haven't listened to too many mixes but I think it's great.

BARBARA STREISAND

Edit: Download link? Or am I missing it? I'd love to add it to my stream playlist :3

Download link is now up, I didn't click it on :p

[quote=panzerxiii]Why does someone always have to get upset?

On topic though, I like it! I haven't listened to too many mixes but I think it's great.

BARBARA STREISAND

Edit: Download link? Or am I missing it? I'd love to add it to my stream playlist :3[/quote]
Download link is now up, I didn't click it on :p
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i don't know shit about EDM but i had fun listening to it, i think that's the point? would love to hear more!

i don't know shit about EDM but i had fun listening to it, i think that's the point? would love to hear more!
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