i'm pretty shit but in this one i did especially shit so i can't wait for the brutal honesty :)

wasn't a team i play with alot so i don't really care about the team aspect just what i could do better.
http://www.mediafire.com/?88hmvwa6ncsn8if

AFTERWARD: was really fun, i'll probably rewatch that a few times to comprehend but he wasn't brutally honest like he said it was all constructive and helpful

Hi cyzer, I'd be really appreciative if you could review my demo.

It's round one of the open playoffs when my team played the number 1 seed, Community Clown College.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/19762650/esea_pov_3017314.dem

I don't know why; but I think there's something in my config/on my computer that makes all of my pov demos really stuttery, so I apologize for that ahead of time. :<

Here's a link to the stats of the match, if you'd like to see that as well.

http://play.esea.net/index.php?s=stats&d=match&id=3017314

Thanks in advance. :D

EDIT:

Thank you so much for the review! I learned a lot, and will do my best to translate it into my match tonight.

To anyone interested:

http://www.twitch.tv/cyzerr/b/336640868

http://uploading.com/files/get/64a4d97b/snakewater_Oct22.dem

Scrim as roamer, if you would be so kind.

EDIT:
http://www.twitch.tv/cyzerr/b/336725013

Thanks a ton man, headed to the jumpiT servers now :D

http://uploading.com/files/get/c455ba34/20121021_1936_cp_process_b10_plato_blu.dem

I'm not that good of a scout, and even though I did fairly well here, I can't help but wonder if I could have did things better, be as brutal as you like, as long as I can learn I don't care :).

ill get to more later tonight!

granary demo, would love some criticism if you could c:
http://ge.tt/6EvSU6Q/v/0

http://www.mediafire.com/?6o8ldczgozeho95

cp_process scrim.
scout

:>

It would be nice to link the VODs of the review so others can watch.

how did you not laugh at saltysally's first rollout?

they're on his twitch http://www.twitch.tv/cyzerr

Australian Div 5 Demo
http://www.mediafire.com/?b7qh62r6q35nq3c
OWL on snakewater

Hi Cyzer, I'd appreciate you reviewing my two demos.

First is an "experienced" newbie mixes on Badlands when I played as Demo. I would say I played out of position and "went huge" sometimes only because I felt like I exploited their weaknesses. Off the top of my head, was alone at mid when I thought I did good damage and died, random det because someone told me to det and I tried to pipe a Demo twice when I thought I had pipes.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ptbfbo

Also, if you'd be kind of enough for my random Medic play on Granary. I'd like more critique on my strategy because I tried to call most of the times. Only thing I really hated was healing IN the garage and Scouts not capping 2nd when I asked them to.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/6ntpqf

I main Demo but also enjoy playing Scout (maybe Medic if I have a good team). I can give you a random Scout demo, it's my 2nd least played class.

Snakewater scrim as a roamer

http://www.mediafire.com/?ct6cy94n961zzr2

nico your link didn't work

sorry about that, I'll use an older one then
http://ge.tt/5K7k7PM/v/0

It's easier to find the reviews by looking in the thread rather then roaming through all of past broadcasts.

all the demo reviews and any highlights/scrims/other important stuff will be uploaded to youtube after.. www.youtube.com/cyzerr

so kind cyzer thanks for doing these

Thanks cyzer! process was in my opinion our worst map during s12. Thanks for the pyro advice. Though i have to say, i have done some good work as pyro defending last so I wouldn't say that its always a bad idea. You are right about it being way more effective on badlands and other more closed in lasts. With that sentry gun i was trying to put it up in weird spot to surprise them because i didnt think i would have enough time to get it to level 2. I was a pyro on 2nd because of a communication error. I thought somebody said that we're going to give up last, but then we didn't so then my mind was like "wat is going on" and i trekked on forward to our second.

Just thought i would explain what i was thinking so that people that watched my demo might have a better understanding on what was going on in my open level brain.

I think you should do a general overview for process because its a popular map but I feel like a lot of people don't know how to it play it. You could go over some strats, positions, holds, etc :>

continue doing these cyzer. You're great at them and pretty insightful. holy shit this post is 2long.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iXRwjGXOBaI&feature=channel&list=UL

Its a video of our scrim from a pockets POV with mumble comms

plz and thanks

I just saw the Vod of my demo, sorry for putting a pug.na demo up there, I do techinically have a team, but they are steel so I don't think any of them would be a good demo to see if I can improve on, I still appreciate the attempt to try to give pointers, if you do this again I should have better demos of scrims and/or matches.

Playing scrims
Playing as demoman, gamesense and dm isnt exactly my forte and would like to address if i overextend myself or not and what to do think about my positioning.
thanks
http://www.mediafire.com/?t4k99jpqh98ic2u

hey cyzer been looking to improve my soldier play and would love any tips you could give me. thanks in advance!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/21370551/seanbud/20121020_0025_cp_process_b10_red_blu.rar

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/83063525/UGC%20Steel%20Demo%20Part%201.dem

and:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/83063525/UGC%20Steel%20Demo%20Part%202.dem

That's half 1 and 2 of cp_warmfront in UGC Steel. We lost, and we'd like some advice.

I'm about to do a couple more now, xprest1ge if you could narrow your choice down to which one you want me to do for now that would be great

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10366950/eulogy_xen_esea_match_granary.dem

this is the STV, i can get the POV later when i get home if you would prefer that.

POV: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10366950/eulogy_esea_pov_xen.dem

Dont make fun of my taunt death >:|

Sure, just the Demo one then (first one).

Thanks.

Thanks for the review cyzer, there was a second half after that which we lost 2-1, but it was all pretty similar sort of play I think.

Do it up Cy! If you want a YouTube home for em, I'd love to host the vids.

I used to think that you were merely an annoying shitposter, but after the first 5 minutes of that demo I'm convinced that you're a comedic genius who built a reputation as one just to troll cyzer into reviewing a demo of someone playing completely blindfolded.