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The Official "Review My Demo" Thread
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#31
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--Name: capnfapn
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/capnfapn/
--Class:scout
--Preferred skill of reviewer: Mid
--http://www.mediafire.com/?ahlpvma5h0qps9i

I think this would be a good one because it showed our team doing badly for the first 4 rounds and then having an awesome comeback, so hopefully it should show what it looks like when you're doing a bad job and a good job :>

--Name: capnfapn
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/capnfapn/
--Class:scout
--Preferred skill of reviewer: Mid
--http://www.mediafire.com/?ahlpvma5h0qps9i

I think this would be a good one because it showed our team doing badly for the first 4 rounds and then having an awesome comeback, so hopefully it should show what it looks like when you're doing a bad job and a good job :>
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#32
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@ capn,
it doesn't bother me that it's a pov, but I could review it with more success if it is the stv, so I can hit tab and see what's going on in terms of numbers in certain situations where you should be getting out, but you're staying in etc... You don't need to upload that somewhere, if you could just link the stv file from esea (i'd grab it but I'm not at home at the moment, so you'd just make things smoother for me having to download your pov, to figure out which match it actually is) life would be easier on me =3

@ capn,
it doesn't bother me that it's a pov, but I could review it with more success if it is the stv, so I can hit tab and see what's going on in terms of numbers in certain situations where you should be getting out, but you're staying in etc... You don't need to upload that somewhere, if you could just link the stv file from esea (i'd grab it but I'm not at home at the moment, so you'd just make things smoother for me having to download your pov, to figure out which match it actually is) life would be easier on me =3
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#33
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I would get you the stv but the stv was broken :<

I would get you the stv but the stv was broken :<
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#34
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rightttt, well I'll get to that pov when I have an hour to kill! =3

rightttt, well I'll get to that pov when I have an hour to kill! =3
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#35
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thank you so much! I really appreciate it <3

thank you so much! I really appreciate it <3
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#36
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Mojoe347

DEMO WAS REVIEWED.

http://steamcommunity.com/id/joejoe347
Medic
Mid or above. I really don't care, I just want some criticism.
Two p-rec demos can be found here: http://www.mediafire.com/?t77z30szfb5dd EDIT: I have a stv as well if that's better than pov: http://ge.tt/1P1jlLO/v/0?c

Now, just a note, this is from a highlander match. Is highlander okay in the thread, all I see is 6s stuff so I wasn't sure.

A little about me, I don't usually feel like I need to much help, I'v been playing the game for so long, but I do know I always have room for improvement, so if you don't mind looking over the demo that would be awesome!
The team I'm on is high mid steel.

Mojoe347

DEMO WAS REVIEWED.

http://steamcommunity.com/id/joejoe347
Medic
Mid or above. I really don't care, I just want some criticism.
Two p-rec demos can be found here: http://www.mediafire.com/?t77z30szfb5dd EDIT: I have a stv as well if that's better than pov: http://ge.tt/1P1jlLO/v/0?c

Now, just a note, this is from a highlander match. Is highlander okay in the thread, all I see is 6s stuff so I wasn't sure.

A little about me, I don't usually feel like I need to much help, I'v been playing the game for so long, but I do know I always have room for improvement, so if you don't mind looking over the demo that would be awesome!
The team I'm on is high mid steel.
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#37
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Reveranse.hf
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197981471236/
Scout
Any
http://www.mediafire.com/?j4amufgolg0af4t

Its just a UGC steel match,we had two good rounds but after that,it went downhill.
I know my aim is not the greatest and movement,but any tips of improving in some areas that I messed up.

Reveranse.hf
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197981471236/
Scout
Any
http://www.mediafire.com/?j4amufgolg0af4t

Its just a UGC steel match,we had two good rounds but after that,it went downhill.
I know my aim is not the greatest and movement,but any tips of improving in some areas that I messed up.
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#38
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--Cruz (may have been aliased as dUbStEpSlAya)
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/cruz_
--Demoman
--Mid+
--https://www.dropbox.com/s/yn2szvet32ilm0o/20120926-1122-cp_badlands.dem

Few moments where I made some bad decisions obviously, but i'm having trouble determining if a lot of my deaths were from the result of me being a moron, or someone else not doing their job properly. Basically what I would like help with is determining the situations where it was within my power to change the outcome of a given fight, and when it wasn't. Thanks to anyone who takes a look at this :)

--Cruz (may have been aliased as dUbStEpSlAya)
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/cruz_
--Demoman
--Mid+
--https://www.dropbox.com/s/yn2szvet32ilm0o/20120926-1122-cp_badlands.dem

Few moments where I made some bad decisions obviously, but i'm having trouble determining if a lot of my deaths were from the result of me being a moron, or someone else not doing their job properly. Basically what I would like help with is determining the situations where it was within my power to change the outcome of a given fight, and when it wasn't. Thanks to anyone who takes a look at this :)
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#39
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--Name: Mike "Squirry" R.
--Steam Profile URL: http://steamcommunity.com/id/Squirry
--Class: Scout
--Preferred skill of reviewer (can range from "any" to "high only." Try to use the low-mid-high designations. I'm european, don't know about skill levels in NA, I'm div4 scout, but I'd like to be reviewed by someone in div1/prem. I want huge hard criticism, I want to fix every point of my play.
--Link to POV demo (2 demos, first one I think I played good, second one I played horribly) : http://www.4shared.com/rar/s1tLZXi_/wars.html?

I hope to be reviewed by a good scout, not only looking the damage, already looking positions and flanking etc etc. Thanks in advance :D

[b]--Name:[/b] Mike "Squirry" R.
[b]--Steam Profile URL:[/b] http://steamcommunity.com/id/Squirry
[b]--Class:[/b] Scout
[b]--Preferred skill of reviewer (can range from "any" to "high only." Try to use the low-mid-high designations.[/b] I'm european, don't know about skill levels in NA, I'm div4 scout, but I'd like to be reviewed by someone in div1/prem. I want huge hard criticism, I want to fix every point of my play.
[b]--Link to POV demo[/b] (2 demos, first one I think I played good, second one I played horribly) : http://www.4shared.com/rar/s1tLZXi_/wars.html?

I hope to be reviewed by a good scout, not only looking the damage, already looking positions and flanking etc etc. Thanks in advance :D
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#40
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I've done capn's plus a few others from my stream chat over on my stream http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay
(capnfapn review in specific link is here http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333449860)

That said, joejoe, i'd be doing yours last out of all the new ones, just due to it being a hl match and I have yet to take a look at any hl demos.
The rest I'd be doing in order of posting, Reveranse, then Cruz, and Squirry if I fit the "skill level" =3
I'll try to get them tomorrow, prolly starting around 10 AM est.

You 3 feel free to add if you want to discuss anything before I do them that you realllllly want me to pay attention to.

I've done capn's plus a few others from my stream chat over on my stream http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay
(capnfapn review in specific link is here http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333449860)

That said, joejoe, i'd be doing yours last out of all the new ones, just due to it being a hl match and I have yet to take a look at any hl demos.
The rest I'd be doing in order of posting, Reveranse, then Cruz, and Squirry if I fit the "skill level" =3
I'll try to get them tomorrow, prolly starting around 10 AM est.

You 3 feel free to add if you want to discuss anything before I do them that you realllllly want me to pay attention to.
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Reveranse
http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333701313
Did a review tonight due to lack of scrims, hope it helps.

Reveranse
http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333701313
Did a review tonight due to lack of scrims, hope it helps.
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#42
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bot_tAyReveranse
http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333701313
Did a review tonight due to lack of scrims, hope it helps.

Thanks bot_tAy,helped a lot. Hopefully we can get a scrim on something soon and I can apply the tips you gave.

[quote=bot_tAy]Reveranse
http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/333701313
Did a review tonight due to lack of scrims, hope it helps.[/quote]
Thanks bot_tAy,helped a lot. Hopefully we can get a scrim on something soon and I can apply the tips you gave.
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#43
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Sure bot_TAy id like to get the demo reviewed by u :DDD

Sure bot_TAy id like to get the demo reviewed by u :DDD
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#44
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--W40kLife
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/TaiRong/
--Medic
--mid+
-- 2 official games (aisafortress cup 6)
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/109083922/semifinal-afc6-med-life-granary.dem
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/109083922/bronze2.dem

--W40kLife
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/TaiRong/
--Medic
--mid+
-- 2 official games (aisafortress cup 6)
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/109083922/semifinal-afc6-med-life-granary.dem
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/109083922/bronze2.dem
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#45
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We need more people like bot_tAy in this thread

We need more people like bot_tAy in this thread
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--watt
--http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198016254153/
--scout
--IM (mid?)
--http://www.mediafire.com/?m854sbiam064d

2 scrims ringing for bearforce vs down to pound, thanks to any potential helpers!

--watt
--http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198016254153/
--scout
--IM (mid?)
--http://www.mediafire.com/?m854sbiam064d

2 scrims ringing for bearforce vs down to pound, thanks to any potential helpers!
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#47
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#30 I just realized I posted that after you saying you'd do it on stream gg

#30 I just realized I posted that after you saying you'd do it on stream gg
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#48
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Squirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out!

Squirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out!
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#49
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bot_tAySquirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out!

what i want to see from like top im/invite players or just really smart people in general is an analysis sort of how pyyyour does it but instead of having the VOD lost inside a 2-4 hour stream session put it on youtube :)

Bot_tay is doing open/low im players and i want to know what people in invite are thinking when they do things :)

[quote=bot_tAy]Squirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out![/quote]

what i want to see from like top im/invite players or just really smart people in general is an analysis sort of how pyyyour does it but instead of having the VOD lost inside a 2-4 hour stream session put it on youtube :)

Bot_tay is doing open/low im players and i want to know what people in invite are thinking when they do things :)
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#50
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bot_tAySquirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out!

DEMO WAS REVIEWED.

Thanks man!

Got another match here. My team lost really hard, so it might be better than the last one I posted.

HL Medic.

Mid+

http://www.mediafire.com/?dn1f3fprwqmch

Only have povs, sorry.

http://steamcommunity.com/id/joejoe347/

[quote=bot_tAy]Squirry (eu scout) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334337518

Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

MoJoe (HL medic) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334343161

Anyone else that happens to enjoy watching reviews, check em out![/quote]

DEMO WAS REVIEWED.

Thanks man!

Got another match here. My team lost really hard, so it might be better than the last one I posted.

HL Medic.

Mid+

http://www.mediafire.com/?dn1f3fprwqmch

Only have povs, sorry.

http://steamcommunity.com/id/joejoe347/
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#51
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So I've started putting these onto a playlist on youtube, for later purposes.
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4b-dzyqAPvXlqezaOWhY7iewshByhbAA&feature=plcp
It's an old channel I shared with community friends, but hasn't been used in awhile.
But it has no time limits already, this is why I'm using this one instead of creating a new one.
Any review I do from here out will be also uploaded to this channel.

With that said, unless specified for a high as fuck player to review them, I'm going to review any posted, so I'll be getting to Life/watt a bit later today, and possibly mojoe's 2nd if the first ones aren't to long.

So I've started putting these onto a playlist on youtube, for later purposes.
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4b-dzyqAPvXlqezaOWhY7iewshByhbAA&feature=plcp
It's an old channel I shared with community friends, but hasn't been used in awhile.
But it has no time limits already, this is why I'm using this one instead of creating a new one.
Any review I do from here out will be also uploaded to this channel.

With that said, unless specified for a high as fuck player to review them, I'm going to review any posted, so I'll be getting to Life/watt a bit later today, and possibly mojoe's 2nd if the first ones aren't to long.
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#52
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Life (asia fortress medic) - http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334447230

Mojoe x2 (HL medic) - http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334448789

Sorry watt, your demos were a bit to long for my time available today, Will be the first ones I do when I stream next!

and uhm, http://www.youtube.com/user/ArrayGames
Reviews will be listed there!

Life (asia fortress medic) - http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334447230

Mojoe x2 (HL medic) - http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334448789


Sorry watt, your demos were a bit to long for my time available today, Will be the first ones I do when I stream next!

and uhm, http://www.youtube.com/user/ArrayGames
Reviews will be listed there!
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#53
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--Maidos (Called Vagina Slayer on that match)
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/Maidos
--demo
--mid or above
--http://www.mediafire.com/?tassc4va3ubr2eh

--Maidos (Called Vagina Slayer on that match)
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/Maidos
--demo
--mid or above
--http://www.mediafire.com/?tassc4va3ubr2eh
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#54
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bot_tAyCruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434

don't hate, but I was bored so I decided to watch a bit of this and see if I agreed with you- a review of the review, as it were :P

props to you for not saying anything wrong about playing demo, but at the same time I honestly felt like you didn't have a lot to say in general

I mean, no offense, but I don't think you need to do demo reviews for non-scout classes, someone else should fill that role (I'd do it but I don't have a stream, I might make one just to start this stuff tho)

[quote=bot_tAy]
Cruz (demoman) -- http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/334339434
[/quote]

don't hate, but I was bored so I decided to watch a bit of this and see if I agreed with you- a review of the review, as it were :P

props to you for not saying anything wrong about playing demo, but at the same time I honestly felt like you didn't have a lot to say in general

I mean, no offense, but I don't think you need to do demo reviews for non-scout classes, someone else should fill that role (I'd do it but I don't have a stream, I might make one just to start this stuff tho)
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#55
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stv of HL gran match
Name: omniscient.
http://steamcommunity.com/id/vetag/
Class: Demo
Preferred skill of reviewer: Any level

http://www.mediafire.com/?ipwjq3hdnhbq4j1

stv of HL gran match
Name: omniscient.
http://steamcommunity.com/id/vetag/
Class: Demo
Preferred skill of reviewer: Any level

http://www.mediafire.com/?ipwjq3hdnhbq4j1
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#56
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Might start doing some of these and putting them up on youtube.

Might start doing some of these and putting them up on youtube.
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#57
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Do it!

Do it!
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#58
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-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.

-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.
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#59
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EsDeeKay-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.

Even if it was your first time calling, i felt there was no point in me watching that after the first 15 minutes. If you just steamroll another team, with your only problem being pushing last (and not pushing advantages very fast at all), there is nothing to gain from it, and it becomes a waste of time.

Maidos, i did yours and it's currently uploading as I type this.

[quote=EsDeeKay]-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.[/quote]

Even if it was your first time calling, i felt there was no point in me watching that after the first 15 minutes. If you just steamroll another team, with your only problem being pushing last (and not pushing advantages very fast at all), there is nothing to gain from it, and it becomes a waste of time.

Maidos, i did yours and it's currently uploading as I type this.
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#60
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please note that cruz is a vac banned division 5 player and probably shouldnt be reviewing mid level play at all lol

http://steamcommunity.com/id/rccruz

please note that cruz is a vac banned division 5 player and probably shouldnt be reviewing mid level play at all lol

http://steamcommunity.com/id/rccruz
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