The intro to this is really good and brings people in to the context of the vid. I really like the format of the video and think the clip selection demonstrates correct decision making really well.
I think it would be good to have at least a second clip for each concept with a really high impact play made off the back of that decision to demonstrate what can be done as some of these he doesn't make huge plays despite him doing everything right.
I also think more clips where drawing is done to show what he can see and focus in a freeze frame is really useful as a visual aid because people watching videos tend not to have the same awareness as someone actually playing the game. (this vid does multiple explanations of the same idea with freeze frames really well).
If you want to still keep the vid at 10 mins you can probably cut out the long outro, a short clip coming back to a player interview at lan is good but keep it to 15-20ish seconds.
The vid explains the decision making process really well. Glad you're making these.