- same as knsume
- don't show projectile hitbox at 0:30 scout kill
- kill at 0:44 is not video worthy
- too quick on the viewpoint changes both in intro and at 0:48
- bad slows at 1:15
- zoom doesnt work with fade at 0:08
- stutter at 0:22
- maybe a bit too much sfm but thats personal preference
- some jumpy transitions throughout the video
sorry for nit-picking but I guess that's kind of what you were asking for