i dont understand why this video has so many dislikes on youtube, please dont let that stop you from continuing to make stuff. i agree with what tino said, you did use third person a bit too much but i dont think you should scrap that idea altogether. you should be using third person either when necessary to show something that couldnt be understood in first person (the rollers on sunshine are a perfect example of that) or as a method to go from shot to shot, which will separate your video from just another clip dump, you showing off an airshot outside of first person was a good use for it, but showing the heavy on that gullywash clip was completely unnecessary. try and get an idea of how your video should flow because breaking that flow is really detrimental to how your video will be perceived. its clear you have a lot of ideas for stuff so you should just experiment, continue to make stuff, and find out what you think looks good
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Wandumat a certain point you have to ask yourself if its too much editing
for me its when i have to take a 5 min break half way through a two minute video cause it genuinely makes me seasick
Weatherspoon[disclaimer] this is an edit(the primary focus is editing)
vry nice showcase of what can be done in tf2 editing
Cyanicif we're allowed to mention individuals, nick from TF2RJweekly used to (and still does) set aside a lot of time to help me with editing techniques i wasnt familiar with as well as give me advice on videos i've made, massive props to him for that.
u got me blushin
make this person on ur team, he will boost morale and general skill level via video game playing
he knows the truth, pick him up
i tried to provide a nice variety, hope theres something in here you enjoy
Cherry Glazerr - Apocalipstick (indie grunge rock)
Dirty Art Club - Basement Seance (psychedelic hiphop instrumentals)
RJD2 - Deadringer (hiphop instrumental)
St. Vincent - Actor (indie rock)
King Gizzard & The Lizard Wizard - Nonagon Infinity (psychedelic rock)
Flying Lotus - You're Dead! (electronic instrumental)
Doopees - Doopee Time (art pop)
Max Roach - It's Time (jazz w/ lots of vocals)
Marika Takeuchi - Colors in the Diary (piano cello duets)
tony has big feet
when i was about 5 years old i was getting bullied at recess and tony told the other kids to go away, this is the person u want on ur team
SHE GOT A LIGHT SKINNED FRIEND LOOK LIKE MICHAEL JACKSON. GOT A DARK SKINNED FRIEND LOOK LIKE MICHAEL JACKSON.
this was a pretty good watch, it definitely does more things well than it does bad, but i do have a few critiques i could give. first and foremost, the worst thing about this was the audio, it seems like you guys recorded audio and video at the same time, so theres always this buzz going on during scenes where conversation is taking place, but then everything cuts off when you shift to music. you should try out using ADR (automated dialogue replacement) where you record your lines on spot and only use it as reference audio, then go back in a more controlled environment and rerecord the same lines, and lay those over your video in post, itll fix a lot of the awkwardness in your conversations. these next few issues are the nitpickiest things ever but you might find them useful, if you intend on using a widescreen resolution for cinematic purposes, resize your video in post instead of putting black bars on top of them, if you render the video with this new resolution the final product could come out like this when played on youtube https://i.imgur.com/ON5mCY5.jpg aswell, use a different font, it doesn't fit the tone of the video that well
also those shots at the table outside look gorgeous, this video has rly good cinematography
great job gamer