this was a pretty good watch, it definitely does more things well than it does bad, but i do have a few critiques i could give. first and foremost, the worst thing about this was the audio, it seems like you guys recorded audio and video at the same time, so theres always this buzz going on during scenes where conversation is taking place, but then everything cuts off when you shift to music. you should try out using ADR (automated dialogue replacement) where you record your lines on spot and only use it as reference audio, then go back in a more controlled environment and rerecord the same lines, and lay those over your video in post, itll fix a lot of the awkwardness in your conversations. these next few issues are the nitpickiest things ever but you might find them useful, if you intend on using a widescreen resolution for cinematic purposes, resize your video in post instead of putting black bars on top of them, if you render the video with this new resolution the final product could come out like this when played on youtube https://i.imgur.com/ON5mCY5.jpg aswell, use a different font, it doesn't fit the tone of the video that well
also those shots at the table outside look gorgeous, this video has rly good cinematography
great job gamer