i dont understand why this video has so many dislikes on youtube, please dont let that stop you from continuing to make stuff. i agree with what tino said, you did use third person a bit too much but i dont think you should scrap that idea altogether. you should be using third person either when necessary to show something that couldnt be understood in first person (the rollers on sunshine are a perfect example of that) or as a method to go from shot to shot, which will separate your video from just another clip dump, you showing off an airshot outside of first person was a good use for it, but showing the heavy on that gullywash clip was completely unnecessary. try and get an idea of how your video should flow because breaking that flow is really detrimental to how your video will be perceived. its clear you have a lot of ideas for stuff so you should just experiment, continue to make stuff, and find out what you think looks good