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Post a Medic demo, get a video response
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#31
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This is an open scrim, ozfort. Name in game is Thermite (medic). Many thanks Slin!

https://stv.qixalite.com/20170528-0530-cp_snakewater_final1.dem

This is an open scrim, ozfort. Name in game is Thermite (medic). Many thanks Slin!

https://stv.qixalite.com/20170528-0530-cp_snakewater_final1.dem
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#32
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Hi Mr.Slin,

My name is Throjnx, and I'm new to 6s. This was a Div 3 scirm. My team convinced me to send you my demo so I can further improve on my skills as a Medic. I would really appreciate it if you can point my flaws so I can work on them :)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ky836wzwp485o63/20170603_2218_cp_sunshine_red_blu.dem?dl=0

Hi Mr.Slin,

My name is Throjnx, and I'm new to 6s. This was a Div 3 scirm. My team convinced me to send you my demo so I can further improve on my skills as a Medic. I would really appreciate it if you can point my flaws so I can work on them :)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ky836wzwp485o63/20170603_2218_cp_sunshine_red_blu.dem?dl=0
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#35
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nvm

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Mojo_da_Kiddthis is from a pug, recently started playing tf2 again so thought getting this reviewed would help me out. https://demos.tf/75593

Here ya go mojo! Also I'm only doing the first demo you posted cause I'm trying to do one for each person :)
You're pretty good for coming back to TF2 and being a bit rusty btw.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXP_rDkz3iQ

[quote=Mojo_da_Kidd]this is from a pug, recently started playing tf2 again so thought getting this reviewed would help me out. https://demos.tf/75593[/quote]

Here ya go mojo! Also I'm only doing the first demo you posted cause I'm trying to do one for each person :)
You're pretty good for coming back to TF2 and being a bit rusty btw.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXP_rDkz3iQ
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Our first match this season; newer team so we could use some feedback :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/91vgj0443tmi3jy/5_17_17_match_1.dem?dl=0

Our first match this season; newer team so we could use some feedback :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/91vgj0443tmi3jy/5_17_17_match_1.dem?dl=0
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Hey slin this is a scrim of cp_snakewater u14 , I'm new to plat and I'm hoping you can give me some constructive criticism.

MEDIC SCRIM

I'm rays xD

http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520042

Hey slin this is a scrim of cp_snakewater u14 , I'm new to plat and I'm hoping you can give me some constructive criticism.

MEDIC SCRIM

I'm rays xD


http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520042
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Rebitehttp://www.mediafire.com/file/4aa48k66m3871eb/demo2017-05-25_18-27-00.dem
Their team were really aggro and I couldn't tell if the team was letting them through, or I was just out of position. Probably a mix of both. I think there's a lot for me to work on.

There's 2 halves, but the second half is a little bit memey, so if you don't feel like it you don't have to

I'm Rebite, maybe mid-open? I don't really know https://play.esea.net/teams/8682632

Hey Rebite,

Shortening up my TL;DRs here -- you could be more aggressive. Make sure you check the end of the video where I draw out how you could be more aggressive.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kT5mmqfFOkw

[quote=Rebite]http://www.mediafire.com/file/4aa48k66m3871eb/demo2017-05-25_18-27-00.dem
Their team were really aggro and I couldn't tell if the team was letting them through, or I was just out of position. Probably a mix of both. I think there's a lot for me to work on.

There's 2 halves, but the second half is a little bit memey, so if you don't feel like it you don't have to

I'm Rebite, maybe mid-open? I don't really know https://play.esea.net/teams/8682632[/quote]
Hey Rebite,

Shortening up my TL;DRs here -- you could be more aggressive. Make sure you check the end of the video where I draw out how you could be more aggressive.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kT5mmqfFOkw
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hey slin, this is an open official (ozfortress), name in game is Max (i dont know why im stewie on tf.tv),

many thanks Max

https://www.dropbox.com/s/59o0kaicyaeqozm/max.dem?dl=0 - stv download
http://logs.tf/1737721#76561198193802859 - logs

hey slin, this is an open official (ozfortress), name in game is Max (i dont know why im stewie on tf.tv),

many thanks Max

https://www.dropbox.com/s/59o0kaicyaeqozm/max.dem?dl=0 - stv download
http://logs.tf/1737721#76561198193802859 - logs
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Hi slin,

This is a scrim from my old team, we also had some trials, the team does not exist anymore so could you mainly focus on my gameplay. This game was not the most terrible game for my as a individual but I feel like my medic died way to much during this game and I feel like I made a lot of mistakes during my gameplay, so would appreciate your thoughts on my gameplay so that I can improve it.

Class : Soldier (pocket)
Division : Mid
Map : cp_badlands
Demo (stv) : https://serveme.tf/uploads/76561198043725693-656807-6-20170509.zip

Hi slin,

This is a scrim from my old team, we also had some trials, the team does not exist anymore so could you mainly focus on my gameplay. This game was not the most terrible game for my as a individual but I feel like my medic died way to much during this game and I feel like I made a lot of mistakes during my gameplay, so would appreciate your thoughts on my gameplay so that I can improve it.

Class : Soldier (pocket)
Division : Mid
Map : cp_badlands
Demo (stv) : https://serveme.tf/uploads/76561198043725693-656807-6-20170509.zip
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Hi I just happened to play medic in a friend's dmix, just wondering if there's anything anyone can learn here since 1) i'm an open player 2) this was a mix

here it is anyway lol
https://demos.tf/76271

starts at about 92000 ingame ticks

Hi I just happened to play medic in a friend's dmix, just wondering if there's anything anyone can learn here since 1) i'm an open player 2) this was a mix

here it is anyway lol
https://demos.tf/76271

starts at about 92000 ingame ticks
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Hi
Can you review demo of my teammate, Xpym(read it like "Hrum")?

https://demos.tf/76336 (blue med)
http://logs.tf/1738843#76561198061825334

We are playing at ETF2L Low, but xpym have some mid experience.

Hi
Can you review demo of my teammate, Xpym(read it like "Hrum")?

https://demos.tf/76336 (blue med)
http://logs.tf/1738843#76561198061825334

We are playing at ETF2L Low, but xpym have some mid experience.
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TeaHi
Can you review demo of my teammate, Xpym(read it like "Hrum")?

https://demos.tf/76336 (blue med)
http://logs.tf/1738843#76561198061825334

We are playing at ETF2L Low, but xpym have some mid experience.

Hey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.

[quote=Tea]Hi
Can you review demo of my teammate, Xpym(read it like "Hrum")?

https://demos.tf/76336 (blue med)
http://logs.tf/1738843#76561198061825334

We are playing at ETF2L Low, but xpym have some mid experience.[/quote]
Hey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.
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Hi mr Slin.

I am D+G kiro, starting blu, there is a scrim before, but the match starts at 360000

I am new to comp, and my team is full of steel players. We are playing in UGC Silver. I have a lot to learn so I would appreciate any type of response/video response if possible. My team let the other team kite too much, we are working on ubers and mobility needed in them.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6viTulDk-xZR2lLOWpMaEtkVjQ

Hi mr Slin.

I am D+G kiro, starting blu, there is a scrim before, but the match starts at 360000

I am new to comp, and my team is full of steel players. We are playing in UGC Silver. I have a lot to learn so I would appreciate any type of response/video response if possible. My team let the other team kite too much, we are working on ubers and mobility needed in them.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6viTulDk-xZR2lLOWpMaEtkVjQ
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Hey Slin,

Name: Slicerogue
Class: Medic
Team: Space Helicopter
Division: ~mid IM
Type of Game: Scrim
Map: Process

http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520237<------ STV download

I have some issues with uber tracking and positioning on mids. I feel like I'm not really playing aggressive with my scouts but I'm not sure if its me that is the issue or my scouts not playing with me. I also was wondering about my positioning generally on holds, and how much I should or shouldn't peek chokes and who I should tank in certain situations.

Hey Slin,

Name: Slicerogue
Class: Medic
Team: Space Helicopter
Division: ~mid IM
Type of Game: Scrim
Map: Process

http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520237<------ STV download

I have some issues with uber tracking and positioning on mids. I feel like I'm not really playing aggressive with my scouts but I'm not sure if its me that is the issue or my scouts not playing with me. I also was wondering about my positioning generally on holds, and how much I should or shouldn't peek chokes and who I should tank in certain situations.
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Mark____My username is kusoban and I play in ETF2L High.

Here's an STV from a recent scrim: https://puu.sh/w1Gq3/c9e86028dc.dem

Hey kusoban. I enjoyed watching you play, so feel free to submit another demo later on in the season. A couple pieces of advice:

1) don't tilt when losing. the scrim started out strong but you lost focus.
2) have better awareness, look at soldiers when they shoot at you
3) think a couple steps ahead

I go into more detail in the video: https://youtu.be/V4EHANiGWAo

[quote=Mark____]My username is kusoban and I play in ETF2L High.

Here's an STV from a recent scrim: https://puu.sh/w1Gq3/c9e86028dc.dem[/quote]
Hey kusoban. I enjoyed watching you play, so feel free to submit another demo later on in the season. A couple pieces of advice:

1) don't tilt when losing. the scrim started out strong but you lost focus.
2) have better awareness, look at soldiers when they shoot at you
3) think a couple steps ahead

I go into more detail in the video: https://youtu.be/V4EHANiGWAo
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Hi Slin, can I send a Scout demo?

Hi Slin, can I send a Scout demo?
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sarjoHi Slin, can I send a Scout demo?

I prefer medic demos since that's my specialty but if you really want me to, I'm willing to do it.
Whatever I can do to help! Just know that I'm a medic main.

[quote=sarjo]Hi Slin, can I send a Scout demo?[/quote]
I prefer medic demos since that's my specialty but if you really want me to, I'm willing to do it.
Whatever I can do to help! Just know that I'm a medic main.
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Hi Slin!

I am a new 6s medic, and I don't have a lot of competitive experience yet. I recently made a new UGC steel team, and we've been playing a lot. This is the first scrim that we won, on snakewater. I feel like all areas of my gameplay could use improvement, and since my team is new, we all could use advice, so if you see anyone else that needs improvement through my POV I'd love it if you pointed that out as well.

In particular, I'd like help with positioning based on the situation, heal priority, and uber pushes.

Here's the demo: http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520330
I am the red medic, ᴎIHԀ⅂O◖∀

Thanks!

Hi Slin!

I am a new 6s medic, and I don't have a lot of competitive experience yet. I recently made a new UGC steel team, and we've been playing a lot. This is the first scrim that we won, on snakewater. I feel like all areas of my gameplay could use improvement, and since my team is new, we all could use advice, so if you see anyone else that needs improvement through my POV I'd love it if you pointed that out as well.

In particular, I'd like help with positioning based on the situation, heal priority, and uber pushes.

Here's the demo: http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/520330
I am the red medic, ᴎIHԀ⅂O◖∀

Thanks!
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burkoname: burko
My team is aiming for high open. One thing in particular that i've been trying to work on is my coordination/synergy with my pocket, who made the transition from scout last season, this is a team that we've been trading scrims with recently, and I would like some help fixing where I went wrong.

http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/518272

Yo Burko, here's the TL;DW:

1) play with team in teamfights
2) think a couple steps ahead, train your healing to become second nature so you don't have to think about it and can devote more of your brain bandwidth to thinking about gamesense
3) tips for better ubers
a) pop through chokes
b) don't pop in the middle of nowhere unless you get a couple kills
c) use number advantage to force their medic first on even ubers

Video: https://youtu.be/T-7mjng6pek

[quote=burko]name: burko
My team is aiming for high open. One thing in particular that i've been trying to work on is my coordination/synergy with my pocket, who made the transition from scout last season, this is a team that we've been trading scrims with recently, and I would like some help fixing where I went wrong.

http://sizzlingstats.com/stats/518272[/quote]
Yo Burko, here's the TL;DW:

1) play with team in teamfights
2) think a couple steps ahead, train your healing to become second nature so you don't have to think about it and can devote more of your brain bandwidth to thinking about gamesense
3) tips for better ubers
a) pop through chokes
b) don't pop in the middle of nowhere unless you get a couple kills
c) use number advantage to force their medic first on even ubers

Video: https://youtu.be/T-7mjng6pek
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Hello. I'm Velocity. 6V6 Medic main currently playing in Silver. I want/plan to play in open next season. Here's my most recent 6s game. PugChamp on Snakewater. I always try my hardest, even in pugs, so this is a good representation of my current skill level as a medic

https://demos.tf/76804

Hello. I'm Velocity. 6V6 Medic main currently playing in Silver. I want/plan to play in open next season. Here's my most recent 6s game. PugChamp on Snakewater. I always try my hardest, even in pugs, so this is a good representation of my current skill level as a medic

https://demos.tf/76804
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Hey Slin, I'm playing Silver medic this season in UGC, we've been having a pretty rough season so far and we can't decide on a main caller, or the main caller we choose doesn't actually main call. I've been thinking of taking the role of main calling myself but I think it would be harder as medic, would appreciate some tips. Anyways, this demo was a scrim from a couple days ago, I think I played pretty well and so did my team, but is just that with no one making plays or calling a push is really hard to get anywhere.

http://sizzlingstv.s3.amazonaws.com/stv/520212.zip

Hey Slin, I'm playing Silver medic this season in UGC, we've been having a pretty rough season so far and we can't decide on a main caller, or the main caller we choose doesn't actually main call. I've been thinking of taking the role of main calling myself but I think it would be harder as medic, would appreciate some tips. Anyways, this demo was a scrim from a couple days ago, I think I played pretty well and so did my team, but is just that with no one making plays or calling a push is really hard to get anywhere.

http://sizzlingstv.s3.amazonaws.com/stv/520212.zip
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MR_SLINHey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.

Xpym is pretty bad at english and he is not a tf.gg user at all, so he is asked me to post here. I am using this demo with his permission

[quote=MR_SLIN]
Hey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.[/quote]

Xpym is pretty bad at english and he is not a tf.gg user at all, so he is asked me to post here. I am using this demo with his permission
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hello mr slin! i have a decent background for medic and this is my first time playing med on a pug scene
i'll really appreciate if you can review this match!!
im the medic for red, Arima Ryūhei

https://demos.tf/76863
my stats -> http://logs.tf/1740214

my teammats also said i outdone the opponent medic and i did quite well, is it true? i'd love your critiques :)

hello mr slin! i have a decent background for medic and this is my first time playing med on a pug scene
i'll really appreciate if you can review this match!!
im the medic for red, Arima Ryūhei

https://demos.tf/76863
my stats -> http://logs.tf/1740214

my teammats also said i outdone the opponent medic and i did quite well, is it true? i'd love your critiques :)
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I am the red med My name is poeyy this is a div 1 scrim im still confused what to do so help me
http://league.asiafortress.com/demos/demos/afsg0220170602-2127.dem.zip

I am the red med My name is poeyy this is a div 1 scrim im still confused what to do so help me
http://league.asiafortress.com/demos/demos/afsg0220170602-2127.dem.zip
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#59
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TeaMR_SLINHey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.

Xpym is pretty bad at english and he is not a tf.gg user at all, so he is asked me to post here. I am using this demo with his permission

Ah okay sounds good.

[quote=Tea][quote=MR_SLIN]
Hey tea, I'm sorry but I don't do demo reviews of other people -- I only do demo reviews of the person requesting the demo review! This is because I stream these commentaries and post them on my YouTube channel, and I wouldn't want people to feel like they're getting roasted publicly. Basically I don't want to be providing unsolicited advice!

If Xpym would like, he/she can post here and I'm more than happy to review.[/quote]

Xpym is pretty bad at english and he is not a tf.gg user at all, so he is asked me to post here. I am using this demo with his permission[/quote]
Ah okay sounds good.
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im red med name is mr.Q https://www.dropbox.com/s/agd06ij3q0b9au9/2017-06-02_19-45-33.dem?dl=0

starting tick37306
my team is low open

im red med name is mr.Q https://www.dropbox.com/s/agd06ij3q0b9au9/2017-06-02_19-45-33.dem?dl=0

starting tick37306
my team is low open
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