So, there's this essay competition at my school and my friend and I are both participating. Problem is his English is godlike and he even got help from an Australian linguist or some shit. So I wanted to ask you tf.tv whether there are any English language fanatics, grammar nazis or just about anyone really who'd wanna review my essay and give me constructive feedback on it.
I'd prefer if you sent me a private message rather than commenting on the thread just so that every review is as unbiased as possible. Thanks to everyone who's willing to help me.
The question is: Is Elon Musk a great man? Nothing else. We were supposed to research everything ourselves. The limit is 600 words (which I hit perfectly). Though, I think the essay needs changes, especially the ending.