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The Official "Review My Demo" Thread
posted in Q/A Help
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#61
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how about we let these people decide if my help is worth anything or not snowblind, theres no need for you to attempt to slander me.

how about we let these people decide if my help is worth anything or not snowblind, theres no need for you to attempt to slander me.
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#62
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slan·der/ˈslandər/
Noun:
The action or crime of making a false spoken statement damaging to a person's reputation.

http://ozfortress.com/showthread.php?t=51341

none of what i've said is false, i am simply stating the truth

slan·der/ˈslandər/
Noun:
The action or crime of making a false spoken statement damaging to a person's reputation.

http://ozfortress.com/showthread.php?t=51341

none of what i've said is false, i am simply stating the truth
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#63
0 Frags +

Maidos: http://youtu.be/s7qD9ycn2pQ

Feel free to take a look at that snowblind, and let me know if theres anything tremendously wrong.

Maidos: http://youtu.be/s7qD9ycn2pQ

Feel free to take a look at that snowblind, and let me know if theres anything tremendously wrong.
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#64
1 Frags +

even after watching the first 5 minutes of the review, I can notice something tremendously wrong with what you've said; you say he and his team are incorrect to hold 2nd at top left, they were 3 down (one body being a demo) vs 5 of red to defend 2nd after a lost mid? realistically they should wait for their players (which is what they did, holding top left) or, if possible/necessary, single uber aggressively onto 2nd (time for respawners to come and clean up post-uber). where else would you suggest they hold?

in the majority of cases (such as this one) it isn't _absolutely_ necessary for a higher level player to review the demo (mid is fine) since the mistakes being made are pretty basic and easily pointed out by someone who has a basic idea of how to play. the issue is that, not only will a few things that are said be wrong (such as above), but it's more that a lot of key issues within the player's play will be missed entirely by another lower level player, and probably picked up by a higher level player.

snowblind really just stated the truth for other people to understand, and I think it's fair that the people you review understand who you are, your status within the australian tf2 community (vac banned) and what level you've played at.

even after watching the first 5 minutes of the review, I can notice something tremendously wrong with what you've said; you say he and his team are incorrect to hold 2nd at top left, they were 3 down (one body being a demo) vs 5 of red to defend 2nd after a lost mid? realistically they should wait for their players (which is what they did, holding top left) or, if possible/necessary, single uber aggressively onto 2nd (time for respawners to come and clean up post-uber). where else would you suggest they hold?

in the majority of cases (such as this one) it isn't _absolutely_ necessary for a higher level player to review the demo (mid is fine) since the mistakes being made are pretty basic and easily pointed out by someone who has a basic idea of how to play. the issue is that, not only will a few things that are said be wrong (such as above), but it's more that a lot of key issues within the player's play will be missed entirely by another lower level player, and probably picked up by a higher level player.

snowblind really just stated the truth for other people to understand, and I think it's fair that the people you review understand who you are, your status within the australian tf2 community (vac banned) and what level you've played at.
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#65
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Just rewatched and yes you are right. Maybe i wasn't watching the killfeed closely enough, I thought that he was the only one down and they'd backed out immediately and were holding passive 5v6. So that's my bad.

As for the last paragraph, yeah i'm not denying i'm vac'd, and if you look strictly at OWL (which i'm assuming you are), it does look like i have 0 experience. But doing so skips out a lot of my history, which I don't really feel is fair to me. I've never claimed to be amazing at tf2 (at least not seriously), I just feel like i am able to contribute and I would like to do so.

Just rewatched and yes you are right. Maybe i wasn't watching the killfeed closely enough, I thought that he was the only one down and they'd backed out immediately and were holding passive 5v6. So that's my bad.

As for the last paragraph, yeah i'm not denying i'm vac'd, and if you look strictly at OWL (which i'm assuming you are), it does look like i have 0 experience. But doing so skips out a lot of my history, which I don't really feel is fair to me. I've never claimed to be amazing at tf2 (at least not seriously), I just feel like i am able to contribute and I would like to do so.
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#66
0 Frags +
CruzMaidos: http://youtu.be/s7qD9ycn2pQ

Feel free to take a look at that snowblind, and let me know if theres anything tremendously wrong.

not one of my best pplays there with poor dm skills but i appreciate your demo review :) thanks

[quote=Cruz]Maidos: http://youtu.be/s7qD9ycn2pQ

Feel free to take a look at that snowblind, and let me know if theres anything tremendously wrong.[/quote]


not one of my best pplays there with poor dm skills but i appreciate your demo review :) thanks
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#67
1 Frags +

Reveranse(rev)
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197981471236
Demoman
Any skill level
http://www.mediafire.com/?9537ae7cazsfkd3

This is a scrim apparently against an open team. My team is steel with two ringers.
I just started maining demo 5 days ago with 40 hours. I want to know how I'm doing and what to improve. I am practicing my rollout,its just different when people are with me. .-.

Reveranse(rev)
http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197981471236
Demoman
Any skill level
http://www.mediafire.com/?9537ae7cazsfkd3

This is a scrim apparently against an open team. My team is steel with two ringers.
I just started maining demo 5 days ago with 40 hours. I want to know how I'm doing and what to improve. I am practicing my rollout,its just different when people are with me. .-.
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#68
0 Frags +

Awesomegy
http://steamcommunity.com/id/volox
Pyro
High Only
http://www.mediafire.com/?eerwt65fp2f8o0k

This is my teams third scrim. I just want to know how I'm doing as a pyro.

Awesomegy
http://steamcommunity.com/id/volox
Pyro
High Only
http://www.mediafire.com/?eerwt65fp2f8o0k

This is my teams third scrim. I just want to know how I'm doing as a pyro.
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#69
1 Frags +

Khronus
http://steamcommunity.com/id/lord_kronos
scout
Invite

https://www.dropbox.com/s/q5mmktz6ymcfxfy/2012-12-18-21-33-z0O0b_vs_gaylee-cp_badlands.dem

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/bkbzb6gfypb4ufn/laVPZohCsV/2012-12-18-22-07-gaylee_vs_whoopp-cp_process_b10fix.dem

Khronus
http://steamcommunity.com/id/lord_kronos
scout
Invite

https://www.dropbox.com/s/q5mmktz6ymcfxfy/2012-12-18-21-33-z0O0b_vs_gaylee-cp_badlands.dem

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/bkbzb6gfypb4ufn/laVPZohCsV/2012-12-18-22-07-gaylee_vs_whoopp-cp_process_b10fix.dem
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#70
-1 Frags +
CruzEsDeeKay-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.

Even if it was your first time calling, i felt there was no point in me watching that after the first 15 minutes. If you just steamroll another team, with your only problem being pushing last (and not pushing advantages very fast at all), there is nothing to gain from it, and it becomes a waste of time.

Maidos, i did yours and it's currently uploading as I type this.

Oh.. yeah.. 4-2 in the end while the 30 minute limit was done is totally a roll. yeah, makes sense, thanks for the effort.

EDIT: it'd be the same if i'd send you my last game, where we totally rolled the other team the first round and than lost 6-1 in 20 minutes. because "rolls".

[quote=Cruz][quote=EsDeeKay]-EsDeeKay/Killstealer on here.
-http://steamcommunity.com/id/schaaphetschaap
-pocket
-mid+
-http://dl.dropbox.com/u/98480406/firstmaincall.dem

Extra info: Was my first time maincalling.[/quote]

Even if it was your first time calling, i felt there was no point in me watching that after the first 15 minutes. If you just steamroll another team, with your only problem being pushing last (and not pushing advantages very fast at all), there is nothing to gain from it, and it becomes a waste of time.

Maidos, i did yours and it's currently uploading as I type this.[/quote]

Oh.. yeah.. 4-2 in the end while the 30 minute limit was done is totally a roll. yeah, makes sense, thanks for the effort.

EDIT: it'd be the same if i'd send you my last game, where we totally rolled the other team the first round and than lost 6-1 in 20 minutes. because "rolls".
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#71
0 Frags +

--Theoneseeker
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/theoneseeker/home
--Demoman
--preferably high, but anyone is welcome :)

**NOTE** Start 5 mins in - other team was 5 until 5 mins in.
--http://speedy.sh/XGjHs/demoreviewTHEONESEEKER.rar or - snakewater .rar
--http://speedy.sh/GA4wU/demoreviewTHEONESEEKER.dem - snakewater .dem

--Theoneseeker
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/theoneseeker/home
--Demoman
--preferably high, but anyone is welcome :)

**NOTE** Start 5 mins in - other team was 5 until 5 mins in.
--http://speedy.sh/XGjHs/demoreviewTHEONESEEKER.rar or - snakewater .rar
--http://speedy.sh/GA4wU/demoreviewTHEONESEEKER.dem - snakewater .dem
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#72
0 Frags +

--› Ghost Akrra
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/ghostakrra
--Scout (Agressive)
--Low - Medium
--http://www.mediafire.com/?gxbj1k26wcg0ux4

--› Ghost Akrra
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/ghostakrra
--Scout (Agressive)
--Low - Medium
--http://www.mediafire.com/?gxbj1k26wcg0ux4
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#73
0 Frags +

--Marez
--http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198050525471
--Roamer
--mid-high
--http://www58.zippyshare.com/v/73834230/file.html
this one is with an actual team where I sucked,this one with in mix group but I rolled em:
http://www33.zippyshare.com/v/5974544/file.html

--Marez
--http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198050525471
--Roamer
--mid-high
--http://www58.zippyshare.com/v/73834230/file.html
this one is with an actual team where I sucked,this one with in mix group but I rolled em:
http://www33.zippyshare.com/v/5974544/file.html
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#74
0 Frags +

- Goat_
- http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198062221457
- Scout
- Anyone who feels to be able to review demos :)
-https://www.dropbox.com/s/qiet8r1e6mqmns7/20130329_2011_cp_process_rc2_red_blu.dem

Was a Div5 Scrim (eu).
Thanks in advance!

- Goat_
- http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198062221457
- Scout
- Anyone who feels to be able to review demos :)
-https://www.dropbox.com/s/qiet8r1e6mqmns7/20130329_2011_cp_process_rc2_red_blu.dem

Was a Div5 Scrim (eu).
Thanks in advance!
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#75
0 Frags +

This topic is dead. Use this one instead: http://teamfortress.tv/forum/thread/7481-yukis-demo-reviews

This topic is dead. Use this one instead: http://teamfortress.tv/forum/thread/7481-yukis-demo-reviews
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#76
2 Frags +

With the fact that the last post was on march 31st and its may 2nd i think people moved on

With the fact that the last post was on march 31st and its may 2nd i think people moved on
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#77
3 Frags +

Cause no one reviewed shit from this thread, I was told to stop doing anything but scout, so as I was the only one doing any of them, thread died.

tldr - People complain to much for what someone is willing to do, to help out.

Cause no one reviewed shit from this thread, I was told to stop doing anything but scout, so as I was the only one doing any of them, thread died.

tldr - People complain to much for what someone is willing to do, to help out.
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