tcmano, i hope you take constructive criticism
this is by far the worst article i have seen on tftv. the first body paragraph alone is responsible for this.
First sentence in 3 parts:
TcmanoFirst off long-time medic veteran lucrative has decided to step down from KUOD Damage to join golden in abandoning Invite to get The Box Tap back together under Predatory Lending Practices to try and fight for an Advanced title after being knocked out completely. this isnt a runon sentence, but due to how long it is and because it is connected using only "to", it sure does sound like one.
Tcmanoget The Box Tap back together under Predatory Lending Practicesmakes no sense to anyone who doesnt know what PLP or the Box Tap is and is therefore vague.
Tcmanoafter being knocked out completelywhat does this mean.
overall, the easiest fix for this sentence is probably splitting it up into more sentences.
TcmanoAfter starting his TF2 career in ESEA Season 2, lucrative has been an Invite mainstay known for playing on staple teams such as MAD LUXURIOUS and Kings Crew.good
Tcmano Last seen playing Invite in Season 2 on the aforementioned MAD LUXURIOUS, along with current KUOD Damage players pauldogg and namesake KJKUOD.there is no subject in this sentence. awful.
rest of the article is whatever.