hey getawhale. i noticed that you saw my reddit post criticizing your casting. but when you quoted it here, you kinda left out the almost constructive part of it. lets take another look:
http://i.imgur.com/3bumFdR.png
now, i think youve got the skills to be a good caster. you have a good voice and personality. but the thing thats bothering me, is that it feels like youre learning the game by casting it. in official casts. which to a lot of players, looks like youre underexperienced. tf2 is a game with a lot going on, and a lot of people making a lot of decisions. so when we have someone that seems a little unsure of why something is happening, or why. and thats the problem. i really only ever see you casting. youre not playing on a team, in esea or ugc, and that tells me that youre not willing to better yourself as a player. the best casters that weve ever had played at the top. even gecks was on an open team this season. so if youre coming here looking for advice, just look at it like any ugc player that comes here wanting sniper or pyro help. just play the game more. youll understand things better when youve done them for the same reason the players are doing them, not just when you birds eye view it in an stv.
EDIT: Guess i got ninjad, but w/e