less 3rd person and floating camera and more 1st person POVs.
the names and health right in the middle of the screen is really annoying.
also you might want to turn your overlay off while you're recording.
your commentary is good, you have great energy and say some funny stuff that makes the cast a little more interesting. my only criticism about the commentary is that you're just telling us what is happening on screen, which isnt that big of a deal if all you're doing is play by play, but some more analysis about what is going on would be more interesting but thats more of a personal preference thing. i just think theres more depth to watching a match than "this guy just jumped in and missed 3 rockets and got DE_STROYED" but then again this looks more like a pug than something you could find in UGC or ESEA so im not sure how much depth there really is.
also: pub casts? is that a thing?