Thank you for the feedback it is most appreciated I. There were some very interesting points made by Tob about minimal editing and cat and I will take this into consideration and Tobs point about the quality of the frags, music and if I post further frag videos on here I shall try to meet this criterion as well as the points about intros and the vignette corners of the screen. Again thanks for the input especially Tob as writing essays take time out of your day and you put a lot of thought into your response.

Woah that's a lot of downvotes any feedback is welcome there's clearly something I've fucked up on there.

I was thinking of making it comic sans but that would be too far

https://youtu.be/jpGIeG2bPSQ

Growel
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