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I wrote an essay for school about Kant's views on ethics and morality and I think it's pretty bad and would like some feedback. My teacher takes 3 months to grade our papers and I handed it in today so I can forget any feedback from him for the time being :/

Feel free to let me know what you think and whether I got the message across clearly enough, or whether I could have improved or gone into further detail :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XYi6up-RUg6GeJHm-OY2CCLevGKLyY864W8UQ2Sy0z4/edit?usp=sharing

I wrote an essay for school about Kant's views on ethics and morality and I think it's pretty bad and would like some feedback. My teacher takes 3 months to grade our papers and I handed it in today so I can forget any feedback from him for the time being :/

Feel free to let me know what you think and whether I got the message across clearly enough, or whether I could have improved or gone into further detail :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XYi6up-RUg6GeJHm-OY2CCLevGKLyY864W8UQ2Sy0z4/edit?usp=sharing
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#2
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paging zheep

paging zheep
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#3
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its so short

its so short
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#4
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my opinion

is that its very

short

my opinion





is that its very







short
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#5
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oJ___its so shortVourimy opinion

is that its very

short

What could I have expanded upon?

[quote=oJ___]its so short[/quote]
[quote=Vouri]my opinion





is that its very







short[/quote]

What could I have expanded upon?
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#6
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ur essay

ur essay
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#7
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i didnt read it so i cant get a good rating

i didnt read it so i cant get a good rating
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#8
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I'm from another country to you so I'm not familiar with the marking process where you're from but it looks like you've neglected to mention his wider theory in relation to his response. Try explaining why the first formulation would naturally lead to the response he gives for example, and just generally be more specific. Explaining the is-ought problem would also be a good way to give your essay a solid base to build off, rather than just going straight for the issue.

I'm from another country to you so I'm not familiar with the marking process where you're from but it looks like you've neglected to mention his wider theory in relation to his response. Try explaining why the first formulation would naturally lead to the response he gives for example, and just generally be more specific. Explaining the is-ought problem would also be a good way to give your essay a solid base to build off, rather than just going straight for the issue.
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#9
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you dont write about kant beeing a racist maybe expand on that :)

you dont write about kant beeing a racist maybe expand on that :)
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